English Os.

I hope i have done well for english.
I rattled off irrelevent answers for english, read the story too deeply,
took it as though it was a poem i was suppose to analyse.
My composition was the only thing i was proud of.

I did the piece on Heroes and wrote about my dad.
Cilched, but the story is unreal.
In this story, my dad has already passed on [he hasnt and he is healthy].
I quoted shakespeare.Yay.
I started out the compo with a sypnosis.

'Every 13th Nov 2007, I would rest myself beside the bed you used to tug me in. Your portrait on my right hand and hope, on my left.Know that each day i live was a day shorter to the time we would meet again...'

Not sure if it works, but i hope it does.

I had a few lines which i am proud of.

'He had bread crumbs for breakfast, rice and gravy for lunch and hunger for dinner'
'Only then he realised that trust comes with lies.'
'He died in the arms of my brother,smiling' [too cliched, yucks]
'We did not mourn his death, instead, we celebrated his life'
'What did Albert Einstine ,Adolf Hitler and my father had in common.
They left behind a legacy,becoming an immortal.'
'The world lost a great man, Heaven gained a glorious seraph.'
'A lost brother, a great man, a saint, my father.'
'We leave the world with nothing, except memories of our great-doings and sins.'
'a begger dies no comet is seen.That very night, a comet flickered across the sky, like a firefly in a huge sheet of grey.A man, strived to stuggle out of poverty, succeeded.'

The middle part of the essay was all bullcrap about my fathers business and hardship.
I just love those lines i came up with.

Mark is in the middle of writing a sonnet, check back in a months time.
Haha.